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Bennett, may you rest in peace.
He was small, wet,
And breathing as if he was trying to hide from me
He was seeable though
The little white spots made him very seeable
Oh, Bennett, Bennett
Where is your mother?
It's dark now, she should be here…
The sun has risen, and he is hungry
His stomach hurts and he feel so cold
He felt so weak, and collapsed
Soon passing out
The innocent little soul, being ripped away from his body
And he began to die
His life being ripped away from the small and new body he had
The innocent little life
Barely, or not even a day old
I hope you rest in peace Bennett
Rest in peace
IndividualityThat town's got no individuality
Not one person has a unique quality
Without choices their lives are boring and bare
They do not have feelings and they don't really care
They're they same, but they don't know another way
They're bound to a routine, and they can't stray away
The GiverGiver of memories
Is in solitude in his work
Valuable to the community
Enable to hear and see beyond
Retains the memories for the citizens
AsherThere once was a boy named Asher
He was a major word clasher
He mixed up "snack"
And then had said "smack"
Then the word he said made laughter
MemoryRecall the events
That The Giver retains
That bring him much pain

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~OrderedChaos1 Jun 18, 2012
A couple tips for making it look less like some sort of canine and more ferret like:
-Give it shorter legs, ferret bodies are pretty low to the ground
-make the body longer, neck could be longer as well
-rounded ears, although the ears don't necessarily have to change
-it might help to have a couple reference pictures of ferrets open to make the anatomy fit better

Otherwise its nice design, but does look very canine, I wouldn't have known it was based on a ferret if you hadn't said so.
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~bluegumibear Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot for the suggestions. I'm probably gonna do a re-draw on the concept art ;]
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